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Visualize,Scrutnize and Remark

Sitting on the chair ,combing her lustrous hair awaiting for her love to caress her, lost in the thoughts of their togetherness. But suddenly the room turned dark, she heard footsteps and through the light from the windows she could see a shadow she jumped on to her chair with fast pounding heart and felt a tap on the shoulder,freaked out looked at the person-- it was her BOSS who woke her up from her fantasy, looking furious ,asked her to finish the project. PS: Written for the contest:Visualize,scrutinize and Remark Written Date:11-3-2016

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Date: 3/25/2017 12:26:00 PM
Your poem has good structure, with a natural cadence that rewards the reader with a smile at the end. Well done, Emile.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 3/27/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment and have great day :)
Date: 12/5/2016 11:58:00 PM
Wow super and suspenseful. Imaginative. This boss mus be real demanding. Thumbs up. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 12/23/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much :)Have a great day:)

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