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Vision's Quest

Long before the whisper's falling down -- upon your shoulders as with dew's droplets dangling so delicately I've heard all about it resting within your beauty vision's quest -- speaking through the shimmers right out in front of me Slight touch curls to sight enfurled in mystery elegance flows -- blinking under seas of blue filling in the guise of you Before the tumbles where fingers adjust height hopes hinge -- passion's melt is spinning sated lips just beginning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/14/2017 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful vision ....
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Date: 10/12/2017 1:20:00 PM
A tapestry of romantic vignettes wrapped in four slices of love laced poetry, Tim. Such a beautiful poem. With emotional depth in which to draw waters of desire to quench thirsty dreams. Star bright write. Love and more love always.
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Date: 10/12/2017 12:53:00 PM
Dripping passion here, great write Tim!
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Date: 10/11/2017 11:50:00 PM
Passion in the air, good one Tim...
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Date: 10/11/2017 10:00:00 PM
Lovely write romantically spoken Tim
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:34:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic, Tim,,, :) Hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:10:00 PM
A gracefully flowing and romantically beautiful write Tim.
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Date: 10/11/2017 5:39:00 PM
lovely Tim....your romantic words always flow....fav...Seren
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Date: 10/11/2017 3:50:00 PM
so beautiful and passionate Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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