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Visions of Forever

Light pouring down from a ball of fire 93 million miles away If you do not like this fire then you are being foolish You may be working hard You may be relaxing But whatever you are doing You should let some sunlight in your life since only light can repel darkness The wind blows clouds away PEACE WILL DESCEND ON US ALL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/8/2015 5:00:00 AM
I love this poem, Strong and Powerful. Matt, foolish I am not... Light the fire and blow them clouds away. A perfect 7 poem... LINDA
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Date: 3/8/2015 1:15:00 AM
I believe the weather does affect our mood, and when the sun shines it can brighten our lives in many ways... This is an inspiring write. Very nice work, Matthew!
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Date: 3/7/2015 4:52:00 PM
inspired by your sunlit mood.. well done, matthew,, huggs
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Date: 3/7/2015 3:42:00 PM
Very uplifting! Light & Love
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Date: 3/5/2015 11:37:00 PM
Matt, so your week ends on Thursday too? Mine as well!! Except we are required to attend meetings on Friday morning.
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:58:00 PM
It's nice you go to temple. Let me read this now.
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:58:00 PM
this is really nice. I love the sun, and this poem speaks volumes to the sun worshipers like me.
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Date: 3/4/2015 10:58:00 AM
i love the idea of letting sunlight into our lives, matthew, although i'm not sure that will help peace prevail. i enjoyed your poem...
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