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I live on the frozen tundra where cold winds blow I'm never bothered by the amount of ice and snow The thickness of my feathers are deep at my chest like a downy insulated coat that's better than a vest. I'm busy keeping watch over my two mated hens who sit on the nests we've built on mounded dens. I've eleven mouths to feed, all screaming for food at night I'm quite busy searching the neighborhood. My golden eyes are keen so I can see best in the dark When I dive for a morsel I never miss my targeted mark. I hear something scampering beneath the blanket of snow. It's a scurrying little mouse. Be right back, I have to go. Another snack for my babies, newly out of their shells. They think they have to eat when their stomach compels. Now that it's quiet, I'll perch on a branch up in this tree and keep a watch out for predators who want to eat me. Hunting is much easier because my fur coat is purest white. I blend in just perfectly with the snow by day and at night. I can turn my head in any direction by swiveling it around Until my prey approaches, I'm good at not making a sound. A fox is creeping in from the North, hoping for some action but my sharp talons will chase him away, to my satisfaction. Excuse me for a moment, but I see an approaching artic hare, a hardy meal for the chicks, my mates will chew to prepare. There are humans living near by, in a log cabin over the hill they leave meat out for me when they make a fresh kill. I've no reason to fear them because they never hunt for owl. I love living in this frigid climate where I'm free to fly and prowl. __________________________________________________ January 31st, 2016 Owl Personification Contest by Eve Roper

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Date: 3/1/2016 8:06:00 PM
A great entry for this contest, Lin. Very nicely penned! Congrats on your win as well!
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Date: 3/1/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Kelly.
Date: 2/18/2016 10:07:00 AM
You did a fantastic job on this one Lin. Congratulations on your win! #7
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:20:00 AM
Hey Connie! I'm glad you were able to comment...Thank you SO VERY much.
Date: 2/16/2016 1:23:00 AM
Wonderful write Lin n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/16/2016 4:39:00 AM
Thank you, Upma.
Date: 2/15/2016 11:07:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Lin
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:15:00 AM
I appreciate that, Joseph. Thanks.
Date: 2/15/2016 9:57:00 AM
A great personification with so much description and imagery, Lin. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thanks a whole lot, Sandra.. huggin ya back.
Date: 2/15/2016 8:16:00 AM
Wonderful personification, Lin. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine. I was almost ready to start hooting when I'd finished ~ lol
Date: 2/15/2016 7:30:00 AM
Peaches, you have swooped in and swept off with another prize winner. Congratulations. Well deserved, just absolutely too talented. Love your heart!! Peace:)
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Date: 2/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thanks very much, Danny. Careful or you'll spoil me with so many nice compliments ~ all of which are appreciated.
Date: 2/14/2016 11:00:00 PM
Lin, your “ Visions of a Snowy Owl” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. I enjoy the challenges.
Date: 2/14/2016 3:41:00 PM
Wonderful personification, Lin. Sure to top the winners list. Elaine
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Date: 2/14/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thanks,Elaine. I appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 2/1/2016 6:49:00 PM
G'day Lin ... excellent description from you Lin as you take on the life of an owl - Lindsay
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lindsay. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 1/31/2016 7:13:00 PM
personification...you've got yourself in an owl's attire, wow that! you'll make one good hunter...lol, just joking, you've done such great write Lin, your pen's dripped a golden ink (or may i say an OWL-en ink lol) excellent as always, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:51:00 PM
hoo? me? Love your comments, Sage. Thanks so very much.
Date: 1/31/2016 1:07:00 PM
Fabulous personification Lin I think this will do very well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:33:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, and hugs comin' back to you.
Date: 1/31/2016 9:37:00 AM
I like this, nice write!
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Edward.

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