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Visions

VISIONS A Poem by Debbie_Philly " This is a poem I wrote when I was dreaming allot about my life. " VISIONS Daydreams and night scenes are in my mind like an ever present consciousness. Awakening me to see my life as it should be. I float on illusions shaped to fit me. Yet they disperse like clouds of reality bringing me back down. I cling to that bubble I was floating in not wanting it to burst. Visions come to me at night They tell a story, my life as it should be. Truth is revealed to me in signs encrypted with coding only I can understand. I only need to look , listen, accept what it is I see. Then , only then will my path be unveiled to my awakening in self awareness. My dreams unlock my mind, they free my soul unto my happiness. Whispering in my ear…shhh I need to listen. By Debbie Kelly 2007

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Date: 2/8/2014 9:27:00 PM
Easy to read and understand. This needs two corrections: in your eighth line, replace "disburse" (paying out a sum of money) with "disperse" (scattering widely and evenly). In your twentieth line, replace "except" (different from others) with "accept" (take possession of). Everything else looks good.
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/8/2014 9:41:00 PM
Ahhhh Thank you Robert.... would you like a job as my editor...lol I do need one... Thank you again my friend... you words are ALWAYS most Appreciated !!!

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