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Visionary

Tears burn and stream down my face brushing them back, weeping in prayer God please someone to love me for the rest of my life That angelic voice beholding a name Echoes in my memory yet which one Surely not him for true love never hurts a vivid vision some years later detoxing from a psyc drug that nearly took my life I saw my hand in a vision Concentrating on my hand which had power Mental struggle as I watched the vision unfold and drastically exhausting my psyc I then saw a scene of woodland It in itself picturesque Yet something somehow beyond as I concentrated the trees in this scenic view gained vivid hues and the leaves swayed some day I will find my home on Earth and who could hold it against the next man for bearing the name John

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/6/2014 6:00:00 AM
An emotional write!!! Enjoyed
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:12:00 PM
Cindy Lu, I enjoyed Visionary! Intriguing!!
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:15:00 PM
A powerful write here bravo it shows alot of feeling and still wonderful work my dear and thank for your comments on mine. cheri
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Date: 11/22/2013 8:11:00 AM
Incredible. The setting in this piece was very intense. Excellent job!
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