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Poetic Art Review ~ I call P.A.R. HANDsomely hung, a stunning frame surrounds my vision from my minds ~ eye contact with an empty spot, upon a white wall rendering, a picture ~ from my vision I view into my crystal ball Only one hand from wrist-on-up, Knuckles down - Fingers spread-wide, holding a clear-transparent Sphere... simply resting there, Facing me, slender finger-tips Do clasp a crystal ball Viewing this with my analytical Eye-sight, looking right- Into a translucent molecular cue, I did view This flawless vision of ME, reversed Right back, as a mirror reflects an exact Image of oneself, so real to my eye ‘I see', I'm sitting there erect in this Ball my hand ~ a reflected hand, resting, see knuckles on the bottom part, also… inside the spherical Cue, I have had seen Thumb - to thumb an pinky-to-pinky, my outstretched arm with palm-up… extends, pretty-nifty… inside-outside HANDS, barely touching between those two image-hands, a space separating a knuckle from that palm… one outside hand is holding round crystal-ball, a ceiling inside curved-round, see at top one window at along far-side provides a feel, of open-space, patent leather chairs, are real,~ sprawled about… a coffee table, book-shelves hung… concave so rounded, my-eye did span around All this inside a Vision-Framed, Sphere-Ball, held in a single-hand With pictures within... My visional crystal ball... 'a picture hung on my wall' This time my vision has no moral at all… No conclusion, simply, A poetic ‘Vision on my wall'.

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