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Vision In the Evening

The sound of cars rushing by in the asphalt homeland Lights from thousands of apartments What are they thinking in the moving vehicles and small homes? We are each unique yet I believe we are also bigger than just a collection of many bodies and brains We form a whole Everyone is part of it How do I know this? I have no logical proof It is something which can only be proven by insight and feelings Let the spring night roll on! As a part of something bigger than myself I have the right to be here! So do you my friends and readers out there in the darkness!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/5/2014 6:33:00 PM
I agree Matt, we are all connected and if we could just remember that fact we would be kinder to each other. A lovely poem you have penned here, with a quiet but powerful message! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 6/4/2014 4:25:00 PM
astounding,matthew... you charmed me all the way.. huggs
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Date: 6/4/2014 3:55:00 PM
Love this , Matt. And I imagine you WERE read to!!!
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Date: 6/4/2014 3:55:00 AM
There is a purpose for each of the unique persons of the 7 or 8 billion upon the face of this earth..We are not like the ants which leave a chemical trail back to the underground home but yet we are like them designed with a higher purpose which most are not fulfilling ...Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:52:00 PM
I agree with you Matthew , we are all the sum total of something greater than we are!. Great thoughts!
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Date: 6/3/2014 11:01:00 AM
Great expression and support of our darling hero --- a 'priori' Matthew Always~~Keith :-)
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