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Visibilty

Visibility Upon the winds I am Carried Inside mankind I am buried I can speak in every language I am known as a universal bandage In the hardest hearts I create a smile No matter what age they like my style I move the inner being and am outwardly visible Without moving inside I would be invisible What are my two well-known names Music and Song is my call to fame.

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Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 4/5/2012 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations Carole, i can't deny the viabilitity of this poem, visibility, it has proved music and song beyond reality.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/5/2012 7:33:00 AM

i like this a lot. i have connections to music and this poem fits me directly. good job on the discription it was very artfully done.

Debra Squyres

Date: 4/3/2012 6:22:00 AM

Ahhhh....it is indeed !! A well thought out poem...nice shape as well. Music and song speaks to us all !!! Enjoyed !!

Daver Austin

Date: 4/2/2012 1:42:00 PM

Yes! Music, the universal language. Congrats on the selection. daver

Samia Ali Salama

Date: 4/2/2012 10:31:00 AM

I really like your poem. Congratulations on it being a featured poem. Very well-deserved! :)

Melinde Guadalupe

Date: 4/2/2012 9:10:00 AM

very lovely......i love and like it....it made me smile and you just reach my heart....have a nice day(<")

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carole. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2010 8:55:00 PM

Luv both music and song myself Cookie.. this is an exciting read and well scripted words... a wonderful write from your gifted pen.. luv... Linda-Marie..