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My naked feet feel the slick, moist grass in the quiet park as my fingers pluck and trace the soft edges of a flower petal. My back is pricked as I lean against a spiked, tree trunk while my hand swipes off a sticky, delicate cobweb from my face. As I pull off the cobwebs, tree sap drops onto my hair penetrating my scalp, and I attempt to pull off it's gooey sap. Suddenly, I feel the thick, sandpaper lick of a dog's tongue on my cheek, and I laugh, petting his fluffy fur with pleasure. Written on 8/31/2015

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Date: 9/9/2015 7:35:00 PM
Lots of wonderful "touch" imagery here, Laura. I enjoyed reading this and congratulate you on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra! It was an interesting way to express something I don't often write about.
Date: 9/8/2015 9:10:00 AM
Laura, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Skat :)
Date: 9/7/2015 9:09:00 PM
VERY tactile one here!! You did a great job, Laura. Congrats for the win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea! I appreciate it :)
Date: 9/7/2015 9:37:00 AM
Lovely write Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thank you, James :)
Date: 9/6/2015 7:56:00 PM
Fabulous write, Laura, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve! I appreciate your kind rating, too :)
Date: 9/6/2015 12:27:00 PM
enticing portrayal of an experience in the park, laura...thanks for joining my contest and warm congrats!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, Nette! I enjoyed the interesting subject matter.
Date: 9/6/2015 7:58:00 AM
Very lovely write Laura! Congrats on superb win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2015 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma :)
Date: 8/31/2015 4:14:00 PM
This sure touches the senses Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/1/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, Jan :)
Date: 8/31/2015 2:40:00 PM
I think this is awesome, a real mixture of different touch sensations. I think you will do very well in the contest. Good luck : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/1/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Mark :)

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