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Today's the day I can hear people talk Jesus is coming...Lord help me walk I'm so tired and weak and I look like chalk But I must go So many people here shouting and loud I know He won't see me just one in the crowd As I touched His hem He turned around Oh God! He knows! But I heard Jesus can heal me Though tradition just won't let me Get close enough or touch Him I'm unclean If I can make it through this crowd Without getting knocked to the ground Just get close enough touch His hem I know I'll be clean... I couldn't hide as He looked for me So I fell at His feet and told Him everything... Lord for 12 long years I have suffered First one doctor and then another What they did to me would make you shudder If you only knew They took everything I had And left me feeling twice as bad Lord there's got to be something That You can do He said, "Daughter, you took a chance trusting Me... Now live blessed for you're whole and clean" And I know Jesus can heal you So don't let tradition be stopping you Just get close enough to touch His hem and you Will be clean... by~deborah burch© **I wrote this having been inspired from the Gospel of Mark, Chapter 5:21-34....In the New Testament 3/28/2012

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Date: 4/10/2012 6:53:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Easter Inspiration" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 9:00:00 PM
Deborah, I really enjoyed your personalization of this Scripture passage. Well done. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Have a blessed Easter.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/9/2012 3:21:00 PM
thank you so much Kim...I hope your Easter was meaningful to you as well...I heard a bird singing 'He is risen...He is risen..." just after dawn on Easter Sunday...then once the sun was up it no longer 'tweeted' the tune...or that's what it sounded like to me... love debs
Date: 4/6/2012 12:23:00 PM
Deb, congrats on your win..David
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/9/2012 3:18:00 PM
thank you david!! love deb
Date: 4/6/2012 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah xx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/6/2012 4:33:00 AM
Thank you ~GG~ I been reading yours too...awsome writes and wins going on girl!! big huggsss,love deb
Date: 4/5/2012 10:16:00 PM
lcongratulations Deborah on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/6/2012 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Joyce...big huggsss,love deb
Date: 4/5/2012 5:23:00 PM
congrats Deborah on sweet success in my contest for this elegant entry luv.. appreciate support too..
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/5/2012 9:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda for my win in your contest...I am so honoured!!! I am glad you enjoyed it...big huggsss,love deb
Date: 3/29/2012 9:47:00 PM
wow, after what I just posted, I could sure use this type of faith!! But I just can't help thinking some of us are destined to endure pain. You did a great job with this poem. Love how you made the scriptures "real."
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Date: 3/29/2012 2:45:00 PM
Fantastic! This needs music put to it. Have you ever heard the song, "Sitting at the Feet of Jesus"? I encourage you to listen to it- just googel it. Loved your poem!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/29/2012 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Mark...Actually it does have music to it....this is one of the songs I have written as well as put to music...I will certainly look for "Sitting at the Feet of Jesus" and give it a listen...thanks again...big huggsss,love~deb
Date: 3/29/2012 2:36:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/29/2012 3:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Jancarl...huggsss~deb

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