Virgin Paper

Blank white waiting for an excretion of ink to fill imaginary lines. Virgin paper held in reams repudiate the poet's pen, this stark silent bond naked of any water mark. Two sides to the story unwritten imaginary lives wait in the wings.

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Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 8/15/2009 2:42:00 AM

What do you mean by "Hope you will come back soon", Sue? Hey, I've never been away from PoetrySoup to begin with! I still follow it daily and I still enjoy it. I just can't seem to write at all lately, that's all. The muse momentarily deserted me, I guess (for fear of being de-virginized!!! Ha ha ha). But thanks for the thoughts. You take care, Sue. Regards, Fred

Gerry Mattia

Date: 8/14/2009 12:39:00 AM

Love it. Thanks for pulling me back in the soup. I'm going to leave a few behind for you my Captain. . . :-)

Corinne Curcio

Date: 8/12/2009 9:37:00 AM

The last 2 lines are sheet perfection. I love the whole poem though! "Repudiate the poet's pen" is especially fine alliteration. BTW - I made a mistake when I gave "Mother" as the category for my poem "What Lies Beneath" - That must have seemed an even more bizarre poem. Thanks! :-)

Daver Austin

Date: 8/12/2009 6:02:00 AM

How true, and even though one may fill the pages, one is seldom satisfied. Sorry to be so absent, have had eye problems. Thaks for your comments. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2009 4:12:00 AM

Exceptionally terriffic awesome splendid. Right on Sue !!!!!! Love, Carol

Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 8/10/2009 9:25:00 PM

Very creative thoughts and I can feel a connection, surely I do. After being deserted by my muse and having lost the ability to write these past several months, I wish I could reclaim that ability again so I could, hmm, start "de-virginizing" again!!! Honestly though, I prefer to de-virginize, er, write my piece direct into my computer, not on a piece of virgin paper. That way, the poetic debauchery will be much faster! LOL. Good piece you've got here, Sue, I like it. Regards, Fred

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/10/2009 6:35:00 PM

Sue, this is a great, great piece. Ive been trying to write something like this..but youve nailed. Good work..the last stanza is wonderful. BG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/10/2009 5:24:00 PM

I am so in love with this piece..this is wonderful writing..the title is hot...in my faves.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/10/2009 4:14:00 PM

Sue I enjoyed your poem - we all have those moments I reckon - God Bless, MJ

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/10/2009 3:21:00 PM

And just perhaps a masterpiece awaits. Suspensful and intriguing. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/10/2009 3:19:00 PM

o i find this to be a very original thought in how it's to blank sheet with a writer wanting to put words but none, and yet you have with just describing the situation, very good

James Knox

Date: 8/10/2009 2:50:00 PM

excellent poem :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2009 2:47:00 PM

Nicely done. Putting those thoughts down. Sara