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The faintness of flight overwhelms me boxed in caged, corseted, in a cattle car of the air pristine bells and whistles cajole the herd as the breath is cycled and recycled through the bellows of plasticine and metal germs jumping from orifice to orifice knees crushing bosoms braced for the portent the potential the promise of the fall. Faintness elicits only minor response from the tenders who un-tenderly steer the crowd small moans garner memories of the mallet falls.. but fail to unseat the kindness so needed..sought watery eyes wave and the floor seems the only safety and still the settlers stay settled in their complacency.. neither rising to gift an aged woman with their perch or commenting as she hits the floor ah the joys of twenty first century flight in the belly of Virgin America.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/10/2012 9:56:00 PM
This is why I used to get all kinds of "tanked" before, during, and after flights! "double shots of Jack, only 50cent extra!!!~ The VERY friendly skies! Those days are over:) I hope you check out Lawrence F. of CITY LIGHTS as he is one of my heroes of prose, posies, and all things DICTION! Also, it helps that he put on my old Friend Hank Bukowski R.I.P. CHarles! Another beautiful Charlie I know, spent some days in Haight Ashbury, Manson....founder of ATWA! Helter Smellter! Scam!
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:44:00 AM
"Cattle car of the air" - I love that! But what a sad commentary on human nature - nicely penned :)
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:19:00 AM
Oh dear, Debbie you have hit the nail on the head, so to speak, the airlines of the world today all seem to be heading towards what you write here. i am sure it is an ogranized plot (or marketing ploy to use business terminology) to get the general public to upgrade to the inflated cost of Business class. this is going to my fav along with you. harry
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:51:00 AM
oh yay! Thank you, you are a sweetie to do so :D ok see monkey me writing now....
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Date: 1/5/2012 10:01:00 AM
I hope I understood this correctly-- the pitfalls of flying-- you've written this so descriptively well, and with such uniqueness to it-- really enjoyed this one... really like the analogy you put in here, like caged animals... also thank you so much for all your comments in my poems; about the sestina inspired by your contest, Thank You for helping inspire that :D! btw soupmail in a bit...
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