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Heart’s a thumping, senses reeling Never had this kind of feeling Faces ‘round me all a blur Simple words I start to slur Ground’s a moving up and down Room’s a spinning round and round Legs just won’t support my weight How'd I get in such a state? One single drink was all it took To get this poor boy on the hook With all that whiskey wine and beer It’s no surprise I’m feeling ***** And if I get up off this floor Ain’t never gonna drink no more © John W Fenn 28-04-2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congrats John on your HM with this outstanding poetry luv...
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 2:43:00 AM
Funny direction you took here- Congrats to you John
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:00:00 PM
hahaha, I thought it was gonna be about something else. Good win! congratulations. Andrea
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" John. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:14:00 PM
John, thank you for entering my contest. This was a very interesting, well written poem. I am glad it made it into my top 10. Joe
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:56:00 PM
Oh I think I've been in that state once or twice! Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:53:00 PM
Great story. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 3:11:00 PM
Congrats John on your winning poem in Joe's contest .. a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 9/1/2009 5:03:00 PM
LOL my boy went through that at 14 LOL. He was on a sleep over...they got into the airplane samples. He called us and kept us talkin to him till we figured out "something" was wrong. WE went to pick him up from his sleep over party & he ran from the house and threw himself on the cars back seat, groaning. "you don't have to punish me! I'm sick as a dog!" Light & Love PS please write dialect verse for my contest
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Date: 8/30/2009 2:04:00 PM
Good advice to yourself. I like the poem. Sara
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