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Violin Coaster

Not sure what this is growing from within feeling like the quiet crescendo of a violin rising higher, feather-floating up through the air the intensity keeps building, and I am made aware of the color of my soul - the emotions that I hide the feel of the rollercoaster as I get on to ride the dips are so fast the turns so exciting the thrill is sweet and quite inviting the laughter erupts from deep within my belly it makes me feel like I am in a tub full of jelly soothing and delightful, such sweet bliss like the feel of the flutter after a first kiss violin playing, gently and low, the rollercoaster begins to slow does it have to change when I climb off the thudding of my heart will beat soft... Content yet wanting more will be my request this is what its like in the middle of happiness....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/23/2010 5:27:00 PM
A very good poem. Don't let no demon tell u diffrent..Enjoyed..
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:03:00 AM
well written---enjoyed reading today on this early morning, nice way to start my day.
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