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Vineyard

Vigorous, plentiful vines, diligently pruned venture trained upon wire, vast leaves cropped for dolmas. Valued for complex taste, vermillion morsels make vintage wine with patience. 5-4-2021 Pleiades V Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/11/2021 4:08:00 PM
You do great in this genre Juliet! Very imaginative and unique!
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Date: 5/9/2021 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your Vineyard. Happy Mother's Day Juliet. -Richard
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Date: 5/9/2021 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations! Nice!
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Date: 5/9/2021 4:14:00 PM
excellent idea well executed. BIG congrats.
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Date: 5/9/2021 2:50:00 AM
An excellent poem with a smooth flowing feel to it. Grape vines and wine are both close to my heart! Congratulation son placing first, Juliet. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/8/2021 3:20:00 PM
A well written pleiades Juliet, you're right it can't be rushed, patience is key. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 5/8/2021 12:20:00 PM
Lovely poem, Juliet! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/8/2021 11:15:00 AM
- Congratulations on a tasty first place in the contest, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:20:00 AM
A beautifully descriptive, free flowing Pleiades! Congrats on your 1st place win, Juliet! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/5/2021 5:07:00 PM
Excellent, Juliet. I love that last line: 'Wine with patience.' Sounds refreshing! Here's a toast to you! :) gw
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Date: 5/5/2021 5:33:00 AM
Creative and lively... A vision of V... God bless you always. Love, Gina
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