Vii

fireflies swarm igniting dark spaces; empty rocking chair.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/3/2024 1:03:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 11:14:00 AM

LOVELY HAIKU

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 1:54:00 PM

Time for a new piece of poetry Larisa. I await your reentry into the Soup. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/19/2011 11:33:00 AM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Larisa. Love and blessings, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2011 5:18:00 AM

I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today Larisa. I hope to be back soon to read them again. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/25/2008 9:31:00 PM

What a vivid HAIKU! I'm just grabbin' a soda... the cair won't be rocking for long! Well done Larisa!! Best wishes, Keith

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/8/2008 5:37:00 PM

Larisa you painted a lovely picture well done! Laura :)