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Vignettes

I crave for them in weaves of light And scan life’s vignettes on my mind Their charmed love wraps me day and night By the porch, his guitar sings bright Relieving heart’s joys so entwined I crave for them in weaves of light My grandma's laughter soft and sprite My grandpa's brown eyes, firm yet kind Their charmed love wraps me day and night Bedtime tales inspire fancy’s flight Hide-and- seek thrills, now hard to find I crave for them in weaves of light They taught me to win, lose with might Till frail trees sobbed with old age grind Their charmed love wraps me day and night Legacy of my heroes' blessed rite Find me weaving past years all timed I crave for them in weaves of light Their charmed love wraps me day or night (c) *villanelle: 8 syllable count For Janette Fisher's By nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your win in Paula Swanson's "Thread" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/7/2012 10:20:00 AM

Sweet memories are made green by remembering the past. Wonderfully expressed, I do too. Thanks for sharing, love always, bl

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/7/2012 8:35:00 AM

Congrats, nette. Beautiful piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Luv Ralph

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/7/2012 2:40:00 AM

Lovely nette truley lovely. Congratulations x

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/6/2012 10:27:00 PM

Beautifully said Nette. Congrats

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/6/2012 9:10:00 PM

Nette...I absolutely love this poem. I believe that shorter forms of poetry, especially those which adhere to strict syllable counts are the most difficult to write. You make it look easy and that is a credit to your talent. Brilliant work and congrats on an absolutely well deserved win. It is poems like this, that keep me motivated to continue my writing. Keep 'em coming because it is a pleasure to read works from someone who obviously knows what she's doing, and does it well.......S.Ronthorpe

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 2/6/2012 7:14:00 PM

I LOVE this. Congrats on the well deserved win, honey. Some awesome entries for this one. Cheers and hugs, Cyndi

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/3/2012 9:38:00 AM

What an amazing piece!!!! Your a poet that sits up high, hows the view luv?? Your comments always make me smile... hugs all day for you ...luv Michael

George Aul

Date: 2/2/2012 1:26:00 PM

Very nice indeed..........George

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/2/2012 1:16:00 PM

Great descriptions my friend, they bring about a mindful of thoughts and images! I love the threads told within your poem! This is a lovely poem Nette! Awesome Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2012 11:45:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Those grandparents must have been a great pair that brought much love to your life..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/2/2012 11:21:00 AM

their charmed love wraps me day and night.... lovely as usual Nette. I really like villanelles as splendid vehicles for these thoughts... way to go

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/2/2012 8:37:00 AM

weaving threads of family and memories Nette luv.. this is fantastic and much good luck in the new contest.,. a stunning and exciting write luv.. hope u are feeling fine and dandy sweets..