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View From My Porch

Weeping willow 'lone Hummingbirds refuse to land On its longing dew

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De R

Date: 6/11/2010 1:48:00 AM

You've captured a beautiful picture with your sweet words! Great writing!Kisses, Emily

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 10:58:00 PM

Ok, almost time for me to finally leave here. I end off with your beautiful weeping willow.Luv,Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/30/2010 5:48:00 PM

Nice images employed from the porch

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/30/2010 4:50:00 PM

Well written .... very enjoyed

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2010 4:47:00 PM

Great nature write...The Hummingbirds just don't know what they are missing...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/30/2010 4:20:00 PM

Lovely....!! I can sit on my porch too, and watch the birds dip and flutter their wings in the birdbath down below. Nothing can bring a sense of peace more than such a lovely sight!!

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2010 4:03:00 PM

NICELY WRITTEN, ENOYED