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Ignominious consecrations - Arise. Through tainted, synoptic eyes With condescending erroneous lies Despicable temptations - tease and denies My nemesis creation, insatiable appetites are no excuse Rationalizations A pernicious fight, senseless; a tightening noose Ridiculous questions, insidious addictions Perspectives; painful views of captive Suicidal intentions Dauntless drug-use & countless late nights A senseless tightening noose Abject & lost in the rinse An insincere truth, a pernicious fight Without sense, squandered youth Enslaved without any rights. END PLEASE COMMENT!! CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK, (pos. or neg.) CRITIQUES, OR ANY SUGGESTIONS I also enjoy simple lists of words, descriptors of an abstract reaction describe the feelings or ideas my poem invoked or left in feeling or thought. Even on word. is better than none. Thank you