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Vietnam's Broken Souls

Surviving war can break a soul Leave deep inside a jagged hole Workings of a mind pay its toll Getting through today our furthest goal They called you at that early age Nothing really more than boys Thought you were invincible at that stage But M16's became your toys When those of you who did survive Got back to this land of the free You were barely more than alive But spat on by people like we Work for you was hard to find Seen through eyes as though were blind Said no heroes welcome awaited us Just a lonely ride on a quiet bus Asked were we right or were we wrong To with these acts go along In this place did we belong *Thoughts invaded by a trumpets song Too many questions without answers it seems Hope for happiness towards negative leans Blood and anguish fill your dreams You wonder what this torment means Was God there and could He see Things suffered both by you and me If so how could He possibly be A God of love for answers you plea If He did and feels your pain Then He knows at His feet you've lain This broken soul in which you no longer believe It's future now in His hands you leave So many hurt so many dead So many things left unsaid Did they realize or even care Their fear and pain you always share And if you could you would go To where they are and they would know That every day that you have had You remember them all and through the bad You'd say your memories are here with me And each of you I long to see Where ever it is that you may be I pray your souls are resting peacefully When you're gone and leave this land I know you'll search for your brothers and Eagerly reach out your battered hand Beside them forever stand *Enemy blew trumpet before attacking ©Donna Jones

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Date: 11/1/2013 2:34:00 PM
Donna Darlin'.... I commend you fro such a touching account about the plight of many brave warriors.... I just missed that war by three years.... I remember the hate for those 'Nam vets generated by those who had no understanding of what they went through..... May God reserve a place in Glory for those to whom no mercy was shown by an ignorant public..... Jake
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:50:00 AM
Donna, this is a wonderful poem you have written. I see it is one of your older posts but I am glad to have seen it today. Those poor Viet nam vets got no respect. the war was wrong but they deserved to be treated as the patriots they were.
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Donna Jones
Date: 10/23/2013 10:29:00 PM
Thank you so much andrea
Date: 3/24/2013 11:20:00 PM
Dear Donna,Hope this finds YOU Healthy and High in the Spirit.Every once in awhile I read the Perfect POEM The Title makes the Heart leap the content so true and deep.The Soul absorbs the feeling inside,I look at the POETESS with Pride, To be able to say I Know YOU.This is an Angelic Write,God's Blessing guiding the POETS Pen. A definite favourite. I am going to bed now See YOU tomorrow night. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Silent Secret...Harry
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/25/2013 8:40:00 AM
Bless you Harry.....later...my friend....
Date: 1/29/2013 8:34:00 PM
Thanks for reading it and yes we do and their families..maybe someday we will realize war is not necessary I hope
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/29/2013 9:35:00 PM
Well I don't know how I managed comment on my own poem leave it to an okie...sorry..I hope it got to where I intended it to go
Date: 1/29/2013 7:14:00 PM
Hello Donna - Wish people did not have to go through this. Your poem is sensitive and honest. We owe our veterans so much. - Gail
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/1/2013 9:23:00 PM
Thank you Gail...much appreciated
Date: 1/29/2013 12:44:00 PM
Nice work, bitter truth... some day, man's 'brilliance' with find softer solutions to the hard problems... until then, many will suffer for the few that won't... Terry
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/29/2013 1:23:00 PM
Until then one day at a time and remember generally people carry burdens we don't know about. Everywhere we go, the people we see everyday, no telling what demons they keep inside. Thanks for stopping by and the kind words

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