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i am alone. sitting in the dark. with only the world. but still, i cannot help but feel. people breathing, on my neck. reminds me of their presence. they tell me "why are you doing this?" "you have my attention, now stop." "you don't need help." but can't they see that they are blinded by their do gooding, and small donations. am i the only one, that has pulled back the veil that is false pretenses?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/8/2016 3:10:00 AM
Olivia Brooks, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/4/2015 12:17:00 AM
Olivia, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
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