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Video Shame

I'm watching my son Playing his strange game If we're not careful Will he go insane? He seems to enjoy This World of pretend It is just fantasy Not real in the end He's still the same guy I don't see a change You may wonder why I don't think it's strange He knows the difference Between right and wrong Through conversation We helped him along Values that he learned Didn't come from his game If that was the case It would be a shame Video Games Played Contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/20/2013 9:51:00 AM
Richard, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2013 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 1/19/2013 3:21:00 PM
Wonderful piece.Nice presentation...Congrats on your superb win...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/18/2013 11:06:00 PM
Congrats !! I really comes down to talking with the children. Making sure they realize it's fantasy and not real, what's right and what's wrong. Enjoyed your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2013 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Debra
Date: 1/18/2013 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, Richard. There's no question, we need to put time in with our kids and the result will definitely be different. Have a great weekend. Always, Annalise
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2013 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Annalise
Date: 1/18/2013 11:19:00 AM
Good father guiding his son about video games. Congratulations on your win friend Richard and thanks for stopping by on my poem :) Good Day. Hugs, Maria
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2013 1:50:00 PM
Thanks for the hug.
Date: 1/18/2013 8:41:00 AM
You had a different oppinion about it, very thoughtful and could be true. Great Job :))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2013 8:47:00 AM
They say the proof is in the pudding and Matthew is a sensitive artistic and articulate young man. Musician and on his way to becoming a pharmacist. As parents we still decide how much time is spent and what other activities our kids are involved with. We also need to talk to them.
Date: 1/18/2013 7:19:00 AM
Good for you..a good parent and child as it should be. Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2013 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 1/18/2013 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Richard , happy to share a spot xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2013 8:21:00 AM
I feel I am in great company!
Date: 12/24/2012 11:39:00 PM
Great write Richard, :D today I will home later by night, :D wishing you a wonderful day of Christmas :D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/25/2012 7:43:00 AM
It's nice that you will be home for Christmas.
Date: 12/24/2012 4:32:00 PM
what a great way to do this contest. I really should try to think of something. It's a shame that this contest has so few entries. I just know ZERO about video games. I commend you for taking the challenge.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/24/2012 4:56:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/24/2012 4:00:00 PM
Hi Richard, what a really great write about video games. Rollo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/24/2012 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Rollo
Date: 12/24/2012 3:13:00 PM
Its appalling the games of violence on the market for kids, pray for them and point out the true direction is all we can do, good dtuff Richard, Soup mail
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/24/2012 3:35:00 PM
On my way.

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