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Victory Now Mine

Watching you go, awakens my heart, the pain of love, saturates every part. Forgotten tears, safely put away, now bring reminder, of yesterday. Careful footsteps, fade into the crowd, as you scream victory, silent, yet loud. A war now rages, within my heart, as you tried in vain, right from the start. Victory now mine, as I wave goodbye, while the devil of deceit, gives it one last try.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/3/2009 7:09:00 AM
Excellent write..continue to share and thank you for commenting on my work...From the Soul of a Mother was inspired by Michael Jordan contest...I had to enter this one...
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Date: 1/3/2009 6:10:00 AM
deep poetry to think about through out the course of the day. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/2/2009 10:25:00 AM
Is it she who laughs last? A beautiful write!
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Date: 1/2/2009 8:29:00 AM
Standing strong this morning, Christy!! Love the strength in your words!!~ Carrie
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Date: 1/2/2009 8:15:00 AM
Wow!! Love this piece Christy. The devil of decit gives it one more try..love that ..The voive in the piece is very strong, filled with resolve...terrific write.
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