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Below is the poem entitled Victory which was written by poet Carl Fraser. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Stretching my mind accross the dreamscape,
Trying desperatly to find an open door,
Where i can pluck my sane thoughts
From the whirlwind,
Tuck them safely back in again
Bloody knees and knuckles struggle up the mountainside
No ray of hope  to light my way 
As i fight thru the fray
At long last i see the enemy of my soul
Lassoing the whirlwind 
Spinning my thoughts catatonically
I stretch my hands to the heavens
Scream the name of Jesus
And the dream evaporates
 into a misty black haze,
I awake, clear in thought
Peace at heart
Breathe his spirit in deep
Ready for the next battle

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Thank you Carl for reading my write and its my honor to read yours...awesome verse you've shared here and indeed very inspiring..luv it much <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 2:15:00 AM
    A great poem you've penned my dear friend, Carl! When we're feeling down and troubled we'll just call His name and he will be there. A very good spiritual uplifting poem, indeed! Congrats! Thank you for sharing and also for your precious time reading and leaving a nice comment on my poem. All the best always! love/hugs, Leonora