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Victory

Stretching my mind accross the dreamscape, Trying desperatly to find an open door, Where i can pluck my sane thoughts From the whirlwind, Tuck them safely back in again Bloody knees and knuckles struggle up the mountainside No ray of hope to light my way As i fight thru the fray At long last i see the enemy of my soul Lassoing the whirlwind Spinning my thoughts catatonically I stretch my hands to the heavens Scream the name of Jesus And the dream evaporates into a misty black haze, I awake, clear in thought Peace at heart Breathe his spirit in deep Ready for the next battle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Carl for reading my write and its my honor to read yours...awesome verse you've shared here and indeed very inspiring..luv it much <3<3<3 SK
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Date: 12/1/2012 2:15:00 AM
A great poem you've penned my dear friend, Carl! When we're feeling down and troubled we'll just call His name and he will be there. A very good spiritual uplifting poem, indeed! Congrats! Thank you for sharing and also for your precious time reading and leaving a nice comment on my poem. All the best always! love/hugs, Leonora
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