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Victor the Homeless Vet

this is my life it's all i've got take it or leave it like it or not there is the ally where i make my bed my life's in the gutter same place i lay my head since i've returned bringing freedom through war i've been the jon while the streets been my whore it's all i can do to keep partially sane paying for all of my present and your past mistakes victory will come when there's nothing left because out on the street the only victory is death

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Date: 10/4/2016 8:53:00 AM
Love the creative way you pulled this one off Mike! Can't wait to read what you'll write about your night time job!:)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/4/2016 8:54:00 AM
Am having technical difficulties this morning!:(
Date: 10/4/2016 8:51:00 AM
Sorry Mike, wrong comment for this poem!
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Date: 10/4/2016 8:49:00 AM
Love this creative poem about willy the weed Mike! Made me smile and can't wait to read what you'll come up with about your night time job cleaning toilets!:)
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Date: 10/4/2016 8:46:00 AM
Your poem has a lot of truth in it about our unfortunate homeless vets! May God bless them all!:)
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