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Victims of Want

Had there flowed blood In our peasants’ veins We’d have built bridges To join our several ridges. Then the many exiled peers Might re-cross the flooded streams That had divided their dreams And pilloried the science of seers. But the fire of want Had our people dehydrated And those (like me) who bled yet Were catalogued to a grim existence. O posterity! Do not disdain our delicacy; For time is multiplex And might your ship dis-mast!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/12/2013 2:17:00 AM
Man, this is nice, poetic and inspiring
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 11/12/2013 2:26:00 AM
Mwebesa, Dan, Peter, Dinda, Richard, PDA, you all make my day every time I read your comments on this and many other poems. I try to visit but maybe I do not always succeed. But be assured I try and I love it.
Date: 7/31/2013 10:52:00 PM
You will see my name amongst more of your writings... For wise men hide knowledge in their words.
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:23:00 AM
This is a really strong poem, Gerald. You really have it!
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:53:00 AM
This is quite good, you have a unique use of words. I am going to read some more. Welcome to the soup Gerald.
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Date: 7/28/2013 10:13:00 AM
Gerald, the further you get from... hopefully it's all a good want... and you don't disconnect from...luv..inda
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