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I My life has been ravaged, I have been to the top of mountains; and in dark pits savaged, but life is a forever streaming fountain. And I am a victor- so I have managed, have re-created me so many times; I know myself and my power, blooming again and again, a flower; removing past tangled vines. II Moments in life so painful, they could have crushed me; but for lessons learned I am grateful, a fathomless inner strength I see. Oh, why do some have a life so fateful, some say- I have a lovely aura; a bubble of energy that protects, in this short journey, I want no regrets; so I make my life a sweet Pandora. III Oh yes- I could be bitter, for a life full of sorrow and tears; but I prefer to be better, I have been this way all my years. Each death- sadness makes me greater, so although you feel tired, weak and battered;- overcome each hardship with pride, I could fill an ocean with my tears cried; but I am strong- not weak or shattered. ______________________________ September 9, 2016 Poetry/Ode/Victim or Victor Copyright Protected, ID 16-826-909-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Victim or Victor sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place

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Date: 9/22/2016 12:03:00 PM
An inspirational write Constance many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2016 4:30:00 PM
This is a very well written ode, expressing the victory of your fight. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 9/21/2016 4:05:00 PM
So inspirational and uplifting, Broken Wings, despite all your pain and sadness. Beautifully written, and congratulations on your top of the podium First Place win! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/21/2016 3:37:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 9/21/2016 3:06:00 PM
A well- deserved win! Congrats! ~Cindi~
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the first placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/10/2016 6:52:00 PM
Inspiring and well done!
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Date: 9/9/2016 8:44:00 PM
Oh how much do I love this form! you wrote it with such ease too :) good luck :)-luloo
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