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Victim of Misconception

I act courteously around him; dress lightly to enjoy summer breeze; he sees my tongue licking my lips in the sun; I gaze at him lazily, and sigh gently as the ocean breeze blows my dress; "she wants to make love", is all I read deep in his eyes......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/29/2014 2:30:00 PM
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Teddy, (*.*) ....................Linda
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Date: 7/30/2014 2:20:00 AM
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((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( <3 <3 <3 ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Date: 7/25/2014 7:00:00 PM
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******************* LOL, Forever in your page.. Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/26/2014 6:42:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2014 5:15:00 PM
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yes it does
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:07:00 AM
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^_^ **********<3
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:25:00 PM
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^-^ <--- I got the same ears.. LOL
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2014 8:06:00 AM
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That makes the two of us! ^_^
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:40:00 PM
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:) PD
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Date: 7/17/2014 3:39:00 AM
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Teddy ^_^
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:16:00 PM
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:) :) :) :) :) Linda
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:23:00 AM
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^_^...............................^_^.................................^_^..................................^_^............................^_^....................
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Date: 6/21/2014 9:39:00 PM
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LOL,,, back again...LOL.... sending smiles
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2014 9:33:00 AM
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<3 <3 <3 <3...................................<3 <3 <3....................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2014 11:48:00 PM
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hehe back again...Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/21/2014 2:57:00 AM
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Lol..... She's back! She's back! ^_^
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2014 7:48:00 AM
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soothingly romantic excellent pen Teddy congrats on win
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 9:42:00 AM
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Thank you very much for your applause Shadow! ^_^
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Date: 6/19/2014 2:21:00 PM
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thanks for the comment on my comment...Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 1:41:00 AM
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Welcome Linda..........<3 <3 <3...........
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Archana Garg
Date: 6/19/2014 5:50:00 AM
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Clear and compact poem. Congrats on the great win...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:21:00 AM
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Thank you very much Archana! ^_^
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/19/2014 4:31:00 AM
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Nicely stated well said and congratulations on your first place win. Verlena
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:16:00 AM
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Thank you very much Verlena! ^_^
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Date: 6/18/2014 11:26:00 PM
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Teddy, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:13:00 AM
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Thank you very much Linda; I like reading your works and smile too! ^_^ <3 <3 <3
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/18/2014 3:43:00 PM
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congratulations!!!! :D this hilarious :D a man dressed and look like a woman :D gay :D?! did i understand it right.. :D! kudos!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:05:00 AM
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LOLEST!!!!!! : D Thanks Olive!
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/18/2014 3:04:00 PM
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Outstanding.. Congrats
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 9:59:00 AM
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Thanks in loads Tim! :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/18/2014 2:55:00 PM
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Well done! grats on first place. what a winner :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 9:55:00 AM
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I appreciate your applause Casarah! ^_^
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Date: 6/18/2014 12:52:00 PM
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Hi Teddy, an awesome #1.... SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 9:46:00 AM
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Thank you very much Skat! ^_^ <3
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 10:58:00 AM
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A well deserved winner, Hugs jan
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 8:59:00 AM
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Thank you Jan! ^_^
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/18/2014 9:55:00 AM
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Congratulations on the fine win in Gender Bender, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 8:46:00 AM
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Thank you for your continuous support Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/18/2014 9:14:00 AM
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Well done, my absolute favorite! Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 8:25:00 AM
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Thanks for your praise and loving my work Richard! :-)

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