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Victim

The alluring eyes of the aggressor, Blazing with anticipation, As the victim awaits unknowing, Slowly she steps closer, The very senses of her thoughts, Tingle within the bounds of her mind, For the smell emulates, Her pulse quickens, The strike at any time now, The victim he sits, No sense of what is coming, Unit his breath is gone, Devoured by her beauty, And her cunningness, Sh 06/23/10

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Date: 6/16/2016 11:11:00 AM
Scott,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:16:00 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Scott. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 6:47:00 AM
:)
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:08:00 PM
watch out lol,,, very captivating write, enjoyed...P.D.
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:02:00 PM
OoOoOo intriguing and warped, both could play victim if they want! cool poem
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