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Vices ''I Love''

I have a few vices for sure that I really love, For example, I do adore a chocolate bar daily; And well, of course there is coffee, a steaming cup, Oh, then there are the cats, oh I love the cats. The bar has to be dark and velvety chocolate, And the coffee has to be with cream and sugar; Well, the cats I must always have one or two of them, And did I mention the shopping which is my hobby. Oh yes, I do have a thing about shopping often, It has nothing to do with necessity but desire; I do love to shop for girly things and I have a system, Because I like a bargain, I frequent second hand. But, I think my biggest vice if you want to know, Is poetry soup, oh yes, hours, hours I do spend; Writing, viewing, commenting, and just happily dwelling, My vices are not so bad, I don't smoke or do the drugs. Oh did I mention the television watching that I love . . . _____________________________ November 9, 2015 Poetry/Narrative/Vices "I Love" Copyright Protected, ID 725-009-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym For the contest, A Vice You Love, sponsor, Rob Carmack Eighth Place

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Date: 11/29/2015 10:27:00 PM
Ah all so many vices Broken ... lovely write n win.. big congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2015 9:30:00 AM
Upma thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~
Date: 11/29/2015 7:53:00 PM
All wonderful 'vices' Broken Wings! Love the way you wrote this. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2015 9:30:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the comment and the congrats ~
Date: 11/29/2015 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest. Chocolate and shopping are my achille talon.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 6:24:00 PM
Nayda thanks so much for the congrats
Date: 11/29/2015 3:32:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 11/29/2015 12:28:00 PM
Congrats in your win Broken Wings! :) Very well written :)-lu *smiles*
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 2:48:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the smiles
Date: 11/29/2015 11:40:00 AM
Wow. It's lucky that you have all of those other vices to prop up your vice with, BW. Congrats! Viv x
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 2:48:00 PM
Viv, thanks for the fun comment and the congrats
Date: 11/13/2015 11:38:00 AM
your such a saint and you make me feel like the devil.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/13/2015 4:44:00 PM
Nathan, for sure my vices are really nothing, compared to some people, I do not even drink or swear or ... well you get the point, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 11/12/2015 12:36:00 PM
This is a refuge and not a bad place. The funny thing about chocolate is that dark is better, I think. But only up to a point. I don't know if I mentioned that I tried eating 100% cacao (baking chocolate) just to see what it is like. Not a pleasant epicurean experience. Your vices are not bad at all. You are really quite a decent soul--no a marvelous one.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 1:49:00 PM
Duke, you are the sweetest but cacao isn't that is why it tasted so awful, I think my vices are reasonable, and well I love them all so they must be good, and what is wrong with loving poetry, thanks for the beautiful comments on my poetry today, I appreciate that so much ~
Date: 11/11/2015 1:54:00 PM
Nice, PS has become one of mine too.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thanks for the visit.
Date: 11/10/2015 8:49:00 PM
and many more on the list of sweet vices, constance.. love the way this was wonderfully composed!.. ( for one, i'm a soda freak.. bad!)..huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 11/11/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much nette for the visit and the nice comment ~
Date: 11/10/2015 2:08:00 AM
Constance, I share some of the vices you mention... =`) witwiw!!!! i find this write cute and magnetic to my eyes!!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2015 12:42:00 PM
Olive, thank you for the visit and the nice comment, I do love my vices ~
Date: 11/9/2015 4:48:00 PM
Oh my... you DO go on with those vices. ;) A very cute write, BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2015 5:24:00 PM
Lin, thanks for the visit, at last a poem of mine not sad ~
Date: 11/9/2015 1:00:00 PM
I think we share many of the same vices lol - will swap tea for coffee though lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2015 1:20:00 PM
Jan, oh thanks so much for visiting, always nice to have a visit from you, oh yes, I do love a tea once in a while also ~

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