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Vexation In the Garden

where shall I run if the dormant grass remains to prick my bare soles as I scurry to the other side in pursuit of this child whom I would give my very life though her life may not mirror my own the string in her hand that balloon in the sky seem so simple at sunset the clouds they agree not to deter this memory with rain and fulmination sunrays gleam and glow even more the effect weighs heavily upon the skin no need to compare the present with the past she trust her mother, her father, and the heavens the twilight would never lie but right and wrong can touch tomorrow and when tomorrow touches her, I pray it is with hands as gentle as mine

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Date: 12/16/2017 9:24:00 PM
What a beautiful reflection of love for a child, daughter, and life. I absolutely love your imagery.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 12/17/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thanks lady. This poem was written with the heart. Thanks again..............peace!
Date: 12/2/2017 7:22:00 PM
This is so beautiful Richard so well penned One can't help but have a tear in their eye after reading this.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 12/3/2017 7:44:00 AM
Ed that darn grandchild inspires me to no end. All the best..............peace!
Date: 12/2/2017 7:12:00 PM
A vision of a child in the sun holding a balloon comes to mind. An excellent poem that has great lines which casts a scene. Great poem!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 12/3/2017 7:43:00 AM
A friend said I should write more topical poems dealing with current events but my family is my main muse. I'm at an artistic crossroad and I love it.
Date: 12/2/2017 3:15:00 PM
This is wonderful...
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Ricky Muse
Date: 12/3/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thank you S.O. All the best.
Date: 11/29/2017 5:51:00 PM
Just lovely Richard... hugs and smiles :)
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Ricky Muse
Date: 12/3/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thanks lady. This poem literally fell out the sky. Thanks again.
Date: 11/25/2017 1:07:00 PM
A great write a father to his child. tomorrow may bring its worst but your love will always intercede.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 11/26/2017 1:36:00 PM
Nothing inspires me more than family. Thanks for stopping by.................peace!
Date: 11/23/2017 4:12:00 AM
a poem full of love and care and tender....best wishes.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 11/26/2017 1:41:00 PM
I was thinking about global warming as well as family when I wrote this poem. Thanks Stina.

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