Vestige Erased

enslaved mind dissolve remnant of swill supersede suspicion erased "Contest"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick! LUv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/4/2010 4:49:00 PM

I guess it was Rick and I like it too. Congratualtions, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2010 3:20:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your HM in the Eraser contest with another incredible write from your talented self.. enjoy another honor too.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Jared Pickett

Date: 6/3/2010 9:17:00 AM

Excellent word-play my friend..... Keep it up.....:JP]

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/3/2010 3:38:00 AM

Could this be attributed to Alzheimer's? Very compelling and thought-provoking senryu about your father, Rick. Not sure which contest this is for, but I always wish the best for you and your remarkable talent. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2010 12:04:00 AM

loved it!,, enjoyed.. and best wishes on the contest