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Vessel of Birthing Buds

We put the urn aboard ship Roots teeming from lavish fields Yellow bells and peonies birthing soon As the moon softens its limbs Brightening the way our vessel rides Through blissful miles of springtime day. For Contest Complete The Lines of nette onclaud Jul 25, 2015 posted by Rhoma Em Line 5: ‘We put the urn aboard ship.’---- Sappho

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Date: 8/5/2015 8:32:00 PM
very unique one. Makes me curious how Sappho finished up!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/5/2015 12:48:00 AM
you tweaked the theme so differently, rhoma... congrats and thanks for beingpart of this process!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhoma :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win Rhoma!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Rhoma! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:41:00 AM
Rhoma, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:17:00 PM
Rhoma, congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:34:00 PM
beautiful imagery Rhoma congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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