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vesper of vapor

fog fingers the frost
licking, lifting lovingly
vesper of vapor

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  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:05:00 PM
    I agree with everything Carolyn and Dr. Ram have said about this haiku.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:45:00 PM
    Awesome use of alliteration as well as descriptive imagery, Deb. I love the way it flows! If this is for Deb G's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:33:00 PM
    Nice alliteration with good picture of the season, deb

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:18:00 PM
    Very nice Haiku....Jimmy

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:58:00 PM
    wow, Deb, you are really good at writing these personification haiku! Nice finding two haiku from you today!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:55:00 PM
    haiku and alliteration put together in a most stinning way, deb... superb write and winning wishes in the contest, if for one! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:46:00 PM
    Nice.. way.. of haiku sure enjoyed Deb. Plenty of this trace on my window pane... except the licking... have a nice one Den...p.d.