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Verses kisses How sweet is my Phenomenal kisses to taste to feel as sweet as guimaras mangoes from desirous red lips to meet yearning puddle with love inundate heart fallen repeatedly like thundering rain breezing gorgeous fresh air to my soulmate my kimba if you could only taste my verses kisses let it embrace you with love with light *dedicated to my dearest Kimba* sukmawati komala 03 February 2013

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Date: 4/13/2013 10:41:00 AM
taking in one of your earlier poems, not disappointed,,, love this
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Date: 3/25/2013 12:09:00 PM
Dear Sukmawati, Another Jewel of YOUR POETRY. "Kimba" is very Lucky I am a retired Chef and in this Marvelous Write YOU have told me much about YOURSELF. I know YOUR Asian, not South American because of the mention of Guimaras Mangoes I would say Thailand or close to it. Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/25/2013 12:08:00 PM
Dear Sukmawati, Another Jewel of YOUR POETRY. "Kimba" is very Lucky I am a retired Chef and in this Marvelous Write YOU have told me much about YOURSELF. I know YOUR Asian, not South American because of the mention of Guimaras Mangoes I would say Thailand or close to it. Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/19/2013 11:42:00 PM
This is extremely poetical. Congrats ! Thanks for your comments on my little verse. Grateful, if you could comments on my other verses too. Regards Williamsji Maveli williamsji@yahoo.com www.williamsji.com
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Date: 2/19/2013 12:43:00 PM
Love it, Love it, love it ;} I also love mango's ;} you have a blessed day .
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:38:00 PM
He's a blessed man. Although, I don't care for mangos I like this poem.
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:34:00 PM
this is darling!! I love how you made the kisses be verses. WElcome back. Peopel were wondering where you sent, sweetie.
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Date: 2/7/2013 1:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:28:00 PM
Kimba is one lucky guy!...Elegant tribute to your soulmate, Sukmawati - Tim (does anyone ever call you Suka?...I think it sounds beautiful)
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:00:00 PM
Your writes are so refreshing....Ahhhh :o)
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Date: 2/6/2013 8:06:00 PM
HI Sukmawati... wow..what happen to all your poems... about your poem: it is very lovely and cute.. love is embraces as we speak... enjoyed~LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2013 9:01:00 AM
Hi sweetie and thanks for your comment, where have all you poems gone, please tell me you are publishing and not leaving? love this one and Kimba is lucky xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 10:50:00 AM
Your kimba is lucky. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl
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