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Verse

its a poem about the past masculine society and the state of women . My very first here !
"VERSE" The vacant verse Of my only curse Needs some love To be eloped . It can't be high It feels me sigh As am no bold In summer's cold. To make my sins Apart my skin. I deliberately shy. Am stunned why ? I lived in city, Across in pity. But, Now I cheer The days I fear. Hopelessly famed Well in this game. And now I know somewhat why.
S•R• @thatoneshe_

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/19/2016 6:24:00 AM
A wonderful piece.... Congrats Shruti, for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Shruti Rawat
Date: 5/19/2016 11:19:00 AM
Hi ! I didn't check that first. Thanks for informing me and also for appreciating. :)
Date: 5/12/2016 11:17:00 AM
Shruti, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shruti Rawat
Date: 5/12/2016 12:23:00 PM
Ya I am loving it here. And you guys are totally lovely . I would love any such suggestions you'll provide. Ya I would like to know more people here. I always wanted something like this . And now I know about this poetry soup and feel its pretty good here . I've tried for the contests but am not that capable to take par . Well I'll surely check yours . it'll be lovely Thanks! you're really inspiring .
Date: 5/12/2016 9:35:00 AM
Shruti, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.7 out of 7..........//:) with love
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Shruti Rawat
Date: 5/12/2016 12:13:00 PM
Ah god its good to hear every single of you . THANKS for the suggestions . : )
Date: 5/11/2016 10:43:00 PM
S.r.@thatONEShe ,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shruti Rawat
Date: 5/12/2016 12:11:00 PM
Hey thanks for the humble support . its very welcoming here . Thanks ! I Yep friends. :')

Book: Shattered Sighs