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Vernal Equinox

Asterisms flicker one sleek obsidian night; solstice slips away Snowdrop shoots nosing petals into bitter winds; first whispers of spring Sparkling laughter runs among the pebbles and reeds; melt-water music Bright blue, wet green days wash away winters lather; vernal equinox.

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Michael Dom

Date: 4/13/2013 2:30:00 AM

wow! have not been on soup for a while and just saw this win - third place from PD - how cool is that! :-) Thanks big time PD! And thanks everyone else for your congrats.

Donna Jones

Date: 3/24/2013 9:04:00 AM

Congrats Michael....Donna

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/23/2013 8:52:00 PM

Michael, congrats on your win with these very descriptive haiku! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 8:11:00 PM

oh yes, I DO remember this one. BIG congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2013 5:13:00 PM

Hello Michael, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda ((p.s.... i did pass the word around... with most new poetry soup poets.. oh wait, the word I passed around for the new poems of new poets...)) thanks..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2013 5:02:00 PM

I have a descriptive contest going on right now, maybe you would like to check out my newest contest... please! please! I super love everything about the imagery in your haiku... PD

Michael Dom
Date: 3/22/2013 7:14:00 AM

Your high praise is good enough for me PD. But why not put it up with other Soupers work? Ok. Done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2013 5:00:00 PM

Michael, I like the reflection imagery in your first haiku, the dark lasting out the sun. This seems to be having a northerly motion, as Spring picks up the pace to reassure the ones in the Northern Hemisphere. I’m happy to say we Texans, have been enjoying the bright blues almost all year long… your haiku are awesome… Have yourself a nice one :-) always & forever* Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2013 8:11:00 AM

wow, you are a very descriptive haiku writer. I enjoyed these!!! Don't let my sweet kitties fool you. I don't really write about stuff that sweet!!!

Michael Dom
Date: 3/1/2013 7:28:00 PM

Sometimes reading a poem is like a first glass of wine after a long day; the bitter tang hits your pallet and the flavour only blossom when you swallow and breathe.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/1/2013 6:54:00 AM

Good wet Haiku. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver

Michael Dom
Date: 3/1/2013 7:18:00 PM

Cheers Daver.