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Venus In View

Venus in View Oh, megalithic moon, shine your rays upon my beatific being For in this jubilant June, our hearts aflutter forever fleeing My Venus stands still, a Goddess of the crimson songful sky Within a throbbing thrill, my love comes in with a soulful shy Oh Aphrodite grant me courage as the jewels of heaven glow May the oracles flaunty furnish our embrace of eternities echo And thus our love will flourish for the petals of desire bestow. June.22.2018 Seven lines of romantic heaven Sponsored by: Silent One

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/5/2018 4:55:00 AM

Hi John, this is such an awesome write, a poetic gem flowing gold from your golden pen. Your words paint such a heavenly vision. I do so enjoy reading your excellent poetry my friend. This has to be a fave, an awesome write. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2018 1:57:00 PM

Congratulations, WW, on another well-deserved win. What a stunning write! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2018 8:16:00 PM

^WW^, congratulations on your win, a very beautiful verse . Hugs Eve ~`*

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/26/2018 6:55:00 PM

Congrats on this beauty, WW!

Warren Doll

Date: 6/26/2018 7:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your number 1 win, Winged Warrior !

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/25/2018 11:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful inspired poem. The imagery and your talent for describing are awesome!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/25/2018 6:41:00 PM

Many congratulations on your top win in the contest, it was a really lovely poem and certianly a joy to read

John Lawless

Date: 6/25/2018 6:21:00 PM

Congrats on the top spot WW, Venus is still smiling.....

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/25/2018 3:51:00 PM

A top winner! I take great pleasure in sending congratulations to you, WW!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/25/2018 3:04:00 PM

I have always loved this painting by French artist Alexandre Cabanel. I hope one day to see it in person. Your inspired poem is brilliant WW! Congratulations on your well deserved top podium win! : )

Mansi Sharma

Date: 6/25/2018 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations! What a lovely description!:)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/25/2018 9:43:00 AM

Delighted to be back with congratulations :) A lovely day to you dear poet! xomo

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/25/2018 8:48:00 AM

Beautifully brilliant, congratulations on your 1st place WW, Mick

Roy Pett

Date: 6/25/2018 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win WW, beautifully written. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/25/2018 7:19:00 AM

Back to say Congratulations for your top win WW :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2018 6:59:00 AM

Back with congrats WW on your first place in the contest.

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 6:34:00 AM

That must have been some view.. Great romantic lines of poetry WW... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 3:08:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/24/2018 6:15:00 PM

Beautifully written WW! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/24/2018 10:57:00 AM

Tender and sweet....a treat. Good luck in the contest, WW.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2018 6:24:00 PM

such celestial glow throughout your lines; how wonderful to read you today,WW...huggs

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/22/2018 11:08:00 AM

Your seven lines are from heaven! You raised very high the voice of your poetic heart and mind.. So rich in imagery and wording.. Your imagination is unique and beyond what is prevailing.. A FAV and a win for me.. I tremendously enjoyed reading your beauty.. Stay blessed Winged Warrior.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2018 9:46:00 AM

Lovely poetry WW..best for a BIG win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/22/2018 8:49:00 AM

Lovely! The moon and Venus, my dusk dance partners, or rather I theirs ;) never do I tire of their sight. My best to you in the contest. xomo

Lyric Man

Date: 6/22/2018 6:38:00 AM

WW.. I enjoyed reading your "Venus In View"poem this morning. I especially liked your excellent word choice. This should fair quite well in SO's contest!