Venus Christmas Party

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In the coming decades we might have. The ability of interstellar travel and living. This poem is about a CHRISTMAS party on the planet VENUS.

VENUS screams Influential dreams Incredible heavenly bodies BEAMING CRIMSON FOES SOCIALITE codes Hovering SPHERES All cheers send great Wishes good fate VENUS CHRISTMAS craze Maddening Martian haze PASSIONS rave Monday laze Ever lasting kisses Chronic phase Ultimate seduction Immaculate immortality Cleansing MORALITY Mistletoe sumptuous kisses CHRISTMAS SWITCHES Next year all here Repeat with flair

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2015 9:15:00 PM

Here you go, one more poem for the road. Well done on the rhyme and fresh VENUS CHRISTMAS PARTY theme. Valerie, Rave & Lave (: now that's adding a twist of yummy passion. Enjoyed...LINDA

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/18/2015 10:15:00 PM

Thanks Linda. I enjoyed reading your compliment. VB Rogers

Hasan Javed

Date: 2/10/2015 7:02:00 AM

Stopping here with a hello!....nice verses.....do check out mine too regards; HASAN JAVED

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/18/2015 10:22:00 PM

Thank you for your compliment HASAN. I will read some of your work tomorrow. VB Rogers

Jan Allison

Date: 2/7/2015 1:44:00 PM

great descriptive write - I'm content with Christmas in my own home for now lol:-)hugs Jan xx