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Venus and Mars

As the stars cross this brumous night ~ Standing here with these white washing tides Carrying away the sands beneath my feet Glancing beyond the repetitious of this champagne sea Swells amid the rifts now rising.... Before my thoughts and inside of my heart Communing with a chromatic collage of endless faces ~ This colloquy within my own souls revelations As the mist before my eyes begins to clear And the lighthouse of truth, as truth is, begins to appear Castaway phantoms walking upon the waters Beckoning unto me all of their beauties ~ Their irreplaceable hopes and dreams.... Transcending the tangibles, amid an unproportional world The relevancies of every life, speaking unto me As a warm tear rolls down my face While Jupiter explodes, before my eyes ~ Impaling my spirit with these impeccable purities.... Sublime; as I walk further into the swishing swirling currents Toward the fathoms of acceptances understandings Taking their precious hands, as the moon smiles upon their, glow ~ Born anew, within this panoramic and palindrome view.... Embracing their beating breathing hearts~These creations! Turning back the tides of time; castaways no more For it is all of life that I see now, deep inside the splendor The wonders of whom they are, each, as a precious jewel ~ Awakened, amid these implosive clarities.... As the stars cross the fading brumous night Standing here with the white washing tides Carrying away the sands beneath my feet, forevermore ~ Glancing beyond the repetitions of this champagne sea Phantasms of once thought lore, smiling as they come alive Lessons learned, and shifting dunes, of truths unfold.... While these rubies as tears, fall, from the corners of my sight Marking my cheeks, unto their graves of what used to be Slightly quivering lips; as these endless wells of emotion, arise inside Realizing, how much I truly care, for each and every one, of their lives ~ Mars, now embracing Venus with, an everlasting kiss.... ~ Of ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Unconditional Love! ~

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Date: 3/17/2014 8:03:00 PM
Hello john, thank you for your feeling of admiration and warming thoughts to my writings. Had to take a peak at yours and I really enjiyed this one which was one of few I read. It really draws you into the emotions of it's point. I look forward to reading more of yours. It is the other way of my writing but it's inspirational to me. Thank you for taking the time and from it all it has made me aware of you :-). Your opinion and your way
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