Venus

Your infernal far fleeting light affairs attracts so many earthly lonely stares! Goddess of love a moon you still do lack a Lonely travel seems for you a fact -The planet is one of the few in our solar system that has no moon..ironic?-

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Jean Murray

Date: 12/15/2016 5:40:00 PM

You writing about your crazy Irish friend again? What were those four letters James?? Remind me. My daughter is here to explain

Jean Murray
Date: 1/12/2017 4:54:00 AM

It was only in later life I copped on what he meant.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/12/2017 4:53:00 AM

Just seeing this now James. When I was a teenager, My Dad used comment that I needed a rub of the relic.

Just James
Date: 12/18/2016 1:51:00 PM

Explaining is not what you need my friend...:)

Tim Smith

Date: 12/15/2016 2:30:00 PM

A very deep piece James..it carries me away

Just James
Date: 12/18/2016 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Tim ..good.