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Venice

Well, there is no free seat; Fields run in the infinite green; Yellow waves cannot win heat; Such eyes, belong to a queen... He saw the other short menace: Pay attention to pickpockets ! In the crowded train to Venice: No room for other prophets... Dreaming all love's loving parts. However, there is no warning: Beware of the thief of hearts. Will I meet you again, morning?

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Date: 8/29/2019 9:32:00 PM
A lovely city with streets of water that sparkle day and night. This brought back fond memories of my first visit when I was 21. Thank you! : )
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Date: 8/29/2019 7:15:00 PM
I like how this ended up thief of hearts! Cute ending.
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Date: 8/29/2019 4:40:00 PM
Venice is beautiful--yes there are pick pockets. Nicely written, Ovidiu.
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Date: 8/9/2019 10:05:00 AM
Nicely penned piece. Enjoyed the staccato rhythm of it.
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