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Velvet Caress - Lyric

Sing to me with your light my parched soul loves you I'll uncurl my silky tresses to let your fragrance brew Let me weave from dreamy raindrops a blanket that wraps stars I'll take you behind cotton clouds to a world that will be ours Chorus: I carved your name from the golden sky and lit it on warm sand dunes I've waited so long to drench my soul in velvet caress of your tunes Your trembling lips melt frozen breath I am no longer inside me You drip through my crevices in snow I fuse in you, let me be Two parallel waves tied by pearls dance we kiss in tales of love frivolous moments fuse to touch desires pouring stardust from above Let the moon get drunk with our melodies musical sandcastles afloat Embrace me as seashells spill chiming breeze Let me blush, on me you dote Chorus: I carved your name from the golden sky and lit it on warm sand dunes I've waited so long to drench my soul in velvet caress of your tunes Your trembling lips melt frozen breath I am no longer inside me You drip through my crevices in snow I fuse in you, let me be I am no longer inside me I fuse in you, let me be We fuse and sail, let us be.. June 22, 2020 SONGWRITERS CHALLENGE Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton ~Winner: 1st Place

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/5/2020 3:51:00 PM

BIG congrats on yet another first place win, Aditi. You excel my friend in every form--your talents always shine!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 4:09:00 PM

Thank you for such kind encouraging words my friend. I hope to be inspired by your words.

Joseph May

Date: 7/1/2020 7:20:00 PM

This is a lyrical gem just waiting for a melody Aditi, My favorite line : "Let me weave from silky raindrops a blanket that wraps the stars", Congrats on a great win..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:42:00 PM

Glad you love my words Joseph. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/1/2020 1:17:00 AM

Back with congratulations Aditi.. A well deserved win..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/1/2020 7:55:00 AM

Thank you for another visit and your kind wishes Jenish :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/30/2020 11:17:00 PM

Such a lovely song, Aditi, congratulations on placing first:)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 11:58:00 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes Jo :) Blessings

John Watt

Date: 6/30/2020 6:29:00 PM

Just had to return to offer my hearty congratulations for your top placement in the lyric contest AND to enjoy another reading of your lovely creation. It gets better every time, so romantic! Warm regards, Aditi ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 11:58:00 PM

Thank you for another visit and your kind wishes. Your encouragement is really precious for me dear friend. Looking forward to keep learning from you. God bless you :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/30/2020 12:54:00 PM

Aditi, this is just lovely! "I am no longer inside me...I fuse in you." As John said, beautiful phrasing in this very tender, romantic ballad. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings to you dear friend.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:47:00 PM

I am really honored you love my muse Sam! Thank you for your kind visit and gracious appreciation. Blessings and love :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/30/2020 11:21:00 AM

Wow Aditi this is spectacular writing, I could easily hear a melody as I read it aloud, beautiful phrasing, word pairings, just lovely, congrats on a first place win!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:46:00 PM

Glad you loved my muse John! Thank you for your gracious appreciation and my placement in your contest. :)

V. Deepa

Date: 6/27/2020 12:16:00 PM

Wow....romantic ,passionate flow of love song. I wish I could hear you sing this composition of yours.:-) Beautiful imageries.Well done mam.This is gonna be one of my Favourite.:-)Good luck for the contest. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love. ~Deepa

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 9:33:00 AM

Glad you found my muse melodic Deepa! Always delighted to be appreciated by you. Thank you for your kind wishes. Blessings and lots of love :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/22/2020 8:29:00 PM

Your poems are boundless dear Aditi..As boundless as your name!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 1:58:00 AM

I am so honoured you referenced one of the meanings of my name. Such a sweet gesture. Thank you for the appreciation you shower upon my words. God bless you. Much love :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/22/2020 7:06:00 PM

Ah this one reads like a love Y song from one of the old Masters. Fantastic!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 1:57:00 AM

Thank you for such a generous appreciation Caren :) Much love

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/22/2020 5:45:00 PM

This is absolutely gorgeous, Aditi:-) Sure looks like a winner to me. Best of luck in John's contest!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 5:50:00 PM

Really thankful for your wonderful appreciation Edward. Blessings :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/22/2020 6:09:00 AM

This is awesome. I love it. God bless you with a win - Happy writing and love to you, Gina

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and lovely wishes. Much love and blessings. Keep writing and inspiring :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2020 5:23:00 AM

Nice lyric. Loved the lines: I'll uncurl my silky tresses to let your fragrance brew

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 10:04:00 AM

I am so glad you love my words dear Kim :) Thank you for your appreciation. Much love and blessings :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/22/2020 1:18:00 AM

What a wonderful love song.. Let me weave from dreamy raindrops.. a blanket that wraps stars.. This is a gem of song with splendid imagination and poetic expressions.. Good luck..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 10:03:00 AM

I am so glad you love this effort of mine Jenish. Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation. God bless you :)

John Watt

Date: 6/22/2020 1:16:00 AM

Do you have a tune for your lyric? I know you enjoy singing, just wondering if this came out formed as a song? "Let the moon get drunk with our melodies" is such a richly romantic line. Whoever you may choose to sing this to would be a lucky recipient indeed. Simply magical, Aditi, best wishes in the contest! God bless you my friend ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 10:02:00 AM

I don't have a planned tune for this lyric as of now dear friend. But I am glad you consider this to be composed as a song. Though when I wrote these lines, I was humming a random tune. Thank you for such gracious words of appreciation. I really appreciate your constant encouragement. God bless you :)