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Velcro Heart

Zurrip Zurrip rip it, pull it, yank it free peel your velcro heart from me; stick it to lashes stick it to hair stick it to a love that's barely there. Zurrip Zurrip fine job you did to zip me in a velcro heart plays to win loop it in my mind lock it on my tongue hook it on my love, then I guess you're done. Zurrip Zurrip the bristles break the more a velcro heart does take unstick it from my future unstick it from my past rip it from me openly be sure to do it fast. Zurrip Zurrip the taste of love is is never so tart until you find yourself fastened to a velcro heart.

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Date: 11/4/2016 4:09:00 PM
I agree w/Joe, a very creative poem, Krystal. A great title too. Excellent ending. I never could put my finger on why I just didn't care for velcro when it first got on the market. Your poem finally answered one of my personal mysteries of the universe. Ty for sharing such a cool, fun poem. Love and peace to you. RW (Romantic Warrior)
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Date: 1/5/2012 12:10:00 PM
Interesting, unique and entertaining. I love the concept of a velcro heart and all the implications that it entails. Very creative write Krystal. Thanks for sharing.
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