Veiled

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Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date: 04/01/2024. Written in Yalto Form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

within him roars a loud storm of sheer anxiety and a sense of dread... hidden deep beneath a veneer of calm. a hero... well-known for steely fortitude; a soldier confronting a... cancer diagnosis.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/9/2024 4:51:00 AM

Diagnosis of cancer is shattering. Yet he veiled all his anxiety with 'steely fortitude'. A soul stirring poem. We all hide dread and depression under the veneer of a composed countenance. Beautifully written, dear Edward and Congratulations on your great win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/10/2024 4:06:00 AM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Valsa:-)

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2024 2:45:00 PM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/7/2024 8:36:00 PM

Thank you very much for the congratulations, feedback and my placement, dear Constance:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad/powerful "Veiled" write. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/7/2024 8:33:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/2/2024 7:57:00 AM

Once again you shine in your signature Yalto form, my friend. Powerful emotions succinctly conveyed. The ending tugs the heart.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/2/2024 8:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay:-) Your continued support and feedbacks mean a great deal to me, my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/2/2024 6:14:00 AM

A soldier confronting cancer diagnosis? Thats scary and so well written about veiled dear EI, sometimes no one sees whats veiled beneath the strong and calm exterior , the anxiety,and dread, only God knows. What a deeply meaningful poem this is delivered with few words. In such a soulful and sincere manner. Love this! And felt this! A fave as well and best wishes

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/2/2024 8:01:00 AM

Thank you very much for the awesome feedback, visit, and fave, Inky:-) Most obliged.