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Veil of Obscurity

I'm hiding behind this, Veil of obscurity, Because I don't want people, To see who I really am, This veil of obscurity is like a mask, A mask that hides my true emotions, I may smile and laugh with my friends, But behind this veil of obscurity, I'm lonely, sad, and depressed, I strive to show the real me, But I hide behind this, Veil of obscurity, Because I'm scared of being rejected, By my friends and family, So I hide behind this, Veil of obscurity, Hoping that someday I can stop hiding behind this, Veil of obscurity, And show the real me,

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Date: 8/12/2014 12:43:00 PM
Nice write, I hope you find a way to take off that mask.
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Daquan Bowrin
Date: 8/12/2014 1:07:00 PM
thanks

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