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Vehicular Homicide

There is no shame in nakedness of self Discarded were the clothes of woodland creatures Who would have worn them off eventually Stand before me, Look- There upon that black shelf The one that extends forever in directions of the sun Watch- Up and down this opening Lay the bodies of my heritage Killed by “zippets” All my toes, I counted them, they had not a chance Once- The binding season crazed their thought Jezzi was wooing BeBe, and he chased her To what would have been their nest Had he made it cross Watch how it glistens like water beads on a strom I almost darted over it Had it not been for my le-bov-ed, ashee I would be “can’t fly food” What more can this harm do? All their overfeathers, torn thin. Apart went they, under this foul wind and instance Better for you I am wise Observing the forest floor as a watch-maiden The smallest, tiniest, utterance I officiate Like cries on the black shelf Oft they wazzle me eyes burst Panning the crunchy for a victim Only to trail the splitten voice twice seen It is safer here, on the crunchy sound Where the zippets don’t fly We can soar with appetites for tomorrow Beneath the close of our eyes 1. Worst fear- speed (anything higher than 70 mph) 2. Being road kill 3. Owl Entered in to Matt Caliri’s “Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/14/2009 4:43:00 PM
Sandra, I'm impressed. Congratulations on your well deserve placement in Matt Caliri’s “Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:26:00 AM
Brillant writing here, Sandra and a reminder to Slow Down ... smile ... Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest !!
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:33:00 PM
Congrats to you on your well deserved win in Matt's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/10/2009 4:25:00 PM
What a creative poem with a unique ending. Congratulations on your seventh place finish in Matt's contest. Enjoy your honor! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:38:00 PM
Another display of genius ... another good write.
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Date: 6/2/2009 6:27:00 PM
wow @.@ that was interesting, thanks a lot for sharing; I hope you don't get to experience speed so frequently; I wonder, is fear rational? I mean, in a way of being analyzed, thought, rationalized; is there a brain reason for fear or is it just emotion?@.@ thanks for the experience, watch out C=
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations and good luck in the contest. God bless you. Ernilando
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Date: 5/8/2009 7:19:00 PM
Sandra, if this isn't the "Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever," then I don't know what is. Yes, there is humor as well as beauty "Observing the forst floor as a watch-maiden." But the message packs a punch! I'm afraid of high speeds on interstates, so I can really relate to the fear of being "road kill." I'm sending you mail. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:01:00 PM
I agree with Sharon.....wowie...this is amazing....it may be the hardest poem contest ever...but you went above and beyond excellent!! Great job, Sandra!!
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Date: 5/5/2009 5:06:00 PM
What??? How do you do that? Ok, at first, I didn't even realize there was this contest (been off the site for a bit) but wow! You are brilliant, creative, awesome!!! This is truly amazing, and even though I was taken by surprise, I am never surprised by your talent! Going to read this again, because I am simply taken in to another world. What imagination! LOVE it! Love, Shar
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