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So you think you are ready for anything? Sure? No? Thought so From whom do you get your talents? Future thinker, are you not? So how can it be from your parents lol? Give credit where credit is due From where are you coming from? Not from the womb! From heaven Lighten up You are ruffled lol Grrrr Grrrr Far truth Far fetched Really? Has anyone ever called you an angel? Cmon Dedicated you to the Lord Gee Hmm Yup Case closed Beam me up, Scotty Haha

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Date: 11/16/2014 12:32:00 PM
Clever piece, using humor to ministry His Word is wise. The internet is a vast wasteland of lost souls and a forum that presents believers with a wonderful opportunity to glorify God, and for fence-sitters to attract to. It takes creativity, and you delivered, though personally am not into one word lines, don't let me stop you..lol. I like how you cap the starter lines, and leave your lines free standing unless you need a question mark? Brilliant for poetry...nothing inhibited this. Thomas
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/16/2014 12:38:00 PM
Thanks, Thomas! Great feedback. Awesome :)
Date: 11/16/2014 6:48:00 AM
Charming, humorous, delightful, my dear Toquyen! A 7+++ Loving hugs, Jack XXX
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/16/2014 8:03:00 AM
Lol Whoopeeee!!

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