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Vast

Oceans are vast breaking toward a shore Harbors for sealife, both timid and brave Sun is stolen by sea: tales in folklore sunsets seem to melt into ocean's waves. A stark vastness in deserts robed in sand Vicinity where mind tags dreams for play teasing of waterholes, though none at hand Shadows stretching far, chasing end of day The universe, full of planets and stars As we've flown its vastness, we've become tall Though little of wonders seen from afar for Earth is remote, a blue ball, and small Dwelling beneath our temperamental skies smiling one day, the next, storms are forming But their showers are a welcome surprise Skies endlessly vast, sunny or storming The living mind, scientists find, is vast its depth uncharted, but this they now know: we're all one, and there should be no outcast, The edges of hope, beginning to show. April 19.2023 for "Writing Challenge--V Words by Constance La France howmanysyllables=10

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Date: 4/24/2023 5:35:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/27/2023 4:56:00 AM
Hi Constance, you have awesome contests, ill look at your next one. hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 4/23/2023 7:44:00 AM
Such a great poem for the theme VAST. i like it very much . Congrats. hope it placed high.
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Date: 4/23/2023 3:03:00 AM
- A poem that gives many beautiful images, Ann ... congratulations on a great win :) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2023 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations Ann:)
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful write. Have a blessed weekend..........
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Date: 4/22/2023 11:30:00 AM
Hi Ann, Congrats on your win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/21/2023 8:11:00 PM
We live in a vast universe with oceans and deserts which are vast and under a sky so vast too. Beautifully written Ann
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Date: 4/19/2023 3:11:00 PM
filled with a lot of beauty and wisdom, that allows for contemplation...good luck
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/19/2023 4:06:00 PM
Thanks for your nice comments, Frederick.
Date: 4/19/2023 11:38:00 AM
Ann, wonderful reflections on your chosen word! I especially love the love stanza! So many delightful images that send me into the vastness of the space, the mind and oceans! Best wishes for the contest. Easter season blessings of joy!
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/19/2023 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and Easter blessings! It's my favorite, too. :)
Date: 4/19/2023 10:32:00 AM
Hi Ann, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice da:-) Alexis
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/19/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis! I hope your day is nice, too. :)

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